Comments for Space-Time for Everything

Comment on Sunday Special: Week 1: Paper by kids room furniture, kids bedroom furniture, kids chairs

kids room furniture, kids bedroom furniture, kids chairs — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 20:34:49 +0000

So fun story

Comment on Sunday Special: Week 1: Paper by .

Tue, 27 Jan 2009 19:05:19 +0000

It was really good, though I had a little trouble following the plot, but it made sense. I think that if you use this kind of method for the plot, people don’t need to read to the end to get what’s going to happen; they kinda figure it out in the end. But that’s just my opinion, I’m not good at writing…

Again, nice job (or as we like to say it, ‘jorb’)

Comment on Update 1/22 by That emo-ish kid you know...

That emo-ish kid you know... — Fri, 23 Jan 2009 02:44:10 +0000

When are you gonna be done with your story?!?!?!? >.< I really really wanna read it!

Ooh, you should post stuff about your drawing productivity (once you start XD )

Well at least you sound very intelligent talking about game reviews and the near future *envying your skills that will be useful in the future*

ummm…..don’t know what else to say ^^;;;;

-That emo kid you know ^^

Comment on 2008: Reflections & Resolutions by Meimei-chan

Meimei-chan — Thu, 01 Jan 2009 04:13:05 +0000

Well I’m glad this year didn’t suck for you ^^
And I think I have some goals of my own too; trying to be as good as you or better! It may sound mean; but that’s not what I mean! I guess you could say, you’re my inspiration that keeps my pencil sketching out my feelings on a piece of paper then scanning it and waiting for you to see it ^^

Thanks so much for an -almost- awesome year (sorry I screwed up the first part of it with my ‘hate’ phase ^^; that really sucked…) and thanks for helping me get ready for the big years of my life!

Here’s to a great year *clinks soda can*
-Mei mei chan (little sister) >w<

Comment on Split by chronoslayer

chronoslayer — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 22:19:14 +0000

Thanks for the comments! I don’t really ‘write’ for anyone; I just write whatever comes to mind. As for the text-description ration, I’ll keep that in mind for whatever I come up with next. Thanks again!

Comment on Reformatting by chronoslayer

chronoslayer — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 22:13:00 +0000

I mean that I got assigned a bunch of short-term (due the next day) homework, to the point that writing is near impossible.

Comment on Split by therealbeale

therealbeale — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 20:38:56 +0000

Wow, wow, wow, loads of speech. Unless you’re writing a play, I’d suggest getting aroun 75% description, 25% speech. And I’m not really sure who you’re writing this for. If it’s for kids, then you’re encouraging them to sneak out their rooms and play with knives, but you’d be patronising an audience older than 11. Also, you’re constantly changing from the present tense – to the past tense and vice versa, so you might want to fix that.

Comment on Reformatting by therealbeale

therealbeale — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 20:27:47 +0000

What do you mean by “spiked”?

Comment on One Month Later… by Dug

Dug — Wed, 15 Oct 2008 10:40:37 +0000

It’s pretty good ^^
wait- my Dad dies?!?! What’s up with you and somewhat-unhappy endings (particuarly death)????
Thanks to you, I’m going to be an emo little girl T_T (kidding ^^)

It’s a bit confuzzling
@_@
but still good

Talk to ya soon (hopefully), perrito caliente ^^ (we’re keeping THIS nickname XD)
- iSandii-chan, Nami, Onee-chan, Donna; watev you wanna call me

Comment on Introductions by Onee-chan

Onee-chan — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 02:04:03 +0000

Hey, Chrono! Can’t wait to read your stories

-Onee-chan